The squeaking of the rusty swing in the
deserted play area of the garden is a note foreign, intruding upon the sonance
of the night.
The light zephyr carries with it secrets
whispered to it by the frangipanis, as it blows through their flowering tree,
loosening a blossom. The flower surrenders itself and is given a gentle lift by
the breeze before it collapses onto the cropped grass. A bat, almost
camouflaged in the dark, flutters out from a tree and disappears into the night.
The moon is almost full, sailing in her
ascent to her cherished spot in the sky from where she reigns as the hours pass
on. The clouds move with her, guarding her jealously. They claim her beauty for
their own, refusing to share it with the world below. She peeks out shyly from
behind an opening in the clouds that obstinately remain before her, a glimmer
of her iridescence illuminating what little of the garden it falls upon, making
the leaves glisten and outlining the empty playground, silent, but for a frog
croaking harshly under the slide.
Finally, the wind intercedes and nudges
the clouds, reminding them that their journey lies onward, elsewhere.
Reluctantly they float on, leaving bare a jewelled sky, revealing the glowing
orb in all her glory to beam down on earth.
The garden lies still in her
luminescence, unmoved but for an observer who has been watching the
transpiration, swaying wordlessly on the rusty swing.
Love this! Now I'm wondering where you were when you wrote this?
ReplyDeleteAlways a pleasure to hear from you!
DeleteObserved this in a garden of a residential complex in Pune, a city in India about 160-180 km from Bombay.
I also know about Pune :P :) The above passage is rightly as the label it is put under -"creative juices flowing". I was literally swaying my hand and reading it aloud as I read through the passage. Bravo!! :)
ReplyDeleteThis is one of the first I read. It radiates beauty and peace. A timeless jewel of a write.
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